Chapter 3, Page 3

February 19th, 2019, 2:00 pm

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Reply comercole, February 19th, 2019, 2:04 pm

yeah the cities can be rough for crime.

Reply pixlyJolt, February 19th, 2019, 2:25 pm

Pinap berries. The King of all berries.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, February 19th, 2019, 2:29 pm

@pixlyJolt: You and Cedar are agreed on that.

Reply Curmudgeoncorgi, February 19th, 2019, 2:27 pm

Omg that Alolan Meowth in the third panel. I want to hug it.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, February 19th, 2019, 2:28 pm

@Curmudgeoncorgi: Her name is Luma! She's a cameo character from another pokemon story I have. :3

Reply JoeytheShuppet, February 19th, 2019, 3:17 pm

Dang Path-Blocking Earthquakes.

Reply Garnet107, February 19th, 2019, 5:09 pm

Dang Plot-Contributing Earthquakes.

Reply Yellowflame4444, February 19th, 2019, 4:01 pm

Delilah is the embodiment of this comic’s fans: one look at cedar, and she instantly grew fond of her ^^
And I get the feeling cedar’s going to have that effect on many others down the road X3

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, February 19th, 2019, 4:40 pm

@Yellowflame4444: Hahahaha, yup!

Reply LKWayvern, February 19th, 2019, 4:15 pm

What are the first two apocalypse signs tho--

Reply Yellowflame4444, February 19th, 2019, 4:24 pm

The earthquakes and the return of a Pokémon they hadn’t seen in years

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, February 19th, 2019, 4:39 pm

Reply Charvi, February 19th, 2019, 5:33 pm

JOLTIC <3

Reply SyskyLycanwolf, February 19th, 2019, 5:41 pm

Just a little critique. In the third panel the dialogue wasn’t arranged all too well and I needed to take a moment to figure out who was talking and in which order. Remember to arrange dialogue bubbles not too far apart as well as going clockwise with for eye as people read left to right. Hope this helps! :3

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, February 19th, 2019, 5:49 pm

@SyskyLycanwolf: I'm aware already about that panel. I think my bubble placement is usually pretty alright, but I couldn't really figure out a good arrangement for that panel. *Shrug*

Reply SyskyLycanwolf, February 19th, 2019, 6:15 pm

Sorry about that. I just hope I can give some advice. Being a comic artist myself (new albeit), I wanna help others improve as well.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, February 19th, 2019, 6:18 pm

@SyskyLycanwolf: No worries, I totally get you! I appreciate passing along critiques to others. I just happened to already be aware in this case, but I appreciate the thought nonetheless. :3

Reply somerandomguynumber1, February 20th, 2019, 5:53 am

Careful with that egg.
Some mons like omelets.

Reply TerrytheTeryx, February 22nd, 2019, 9:01 am

Is
Is that a flying Joltik in the third panel?

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, February 22nd, 2019, 9:16 am

@TerrytheTeryx: Noo?? He's just on top of the berry shop.

Reply TerrytheTeryx, February 22nd, 2019, 4:59 pm

OHHH I saw the building color as a highlight to the background and I just thought he was hovering over the sign, XD

Reply Z-Gamer007, February 22nd, 2019, 9:15 am

What apocalypse?

Reply Murp (Guest), June 21st, 2019, 3:52 pm

Several notes -What would the fourth sign of the apocalypse be?
-That Dustox must be in love with Cedar... or the egg... or in general... or she's just bedazzled by how cute Cedar is... I can't be certain, but I'm guessing it's the bedazzlement...
-Something tells me that some stuff is about to go down...

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