Intermission 1, Page 1

June 15th, 2019, 2:00 pm

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Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 13th, 2019, 10:15 pm


This chapter of FYR is trigger warned for mild blood. If you feel as though this will affect you, take caution reading this chapter. And feel free to PM me with questions.

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Reply comercole, June 15th, 2019, 2:19 pm

hello woah she is pissed!!

Reply Truefan108, June 15th, 2019, 2:57 pm

Briar is pissed off. Its kinda funny how ticked she is. I bet once she sees Cedar. That rage will erupt

Reply Pokemon151 (Guest), June 15th, 2019, 3:08 pm

Oooo looks like someone's pissed off

Reply RioBlitzle, June 15th, 2019, 3:16 pm

"mild blood warning" UH OH I DONT TRUST LIKE THAT

Reply pixlyJolt, June 17th, 2019, 6:21 am

Plot twist: The blood is just a staged thing and is just Tamato berry juice

Reply Dotpoint, June 15th, 2019, 3:57 pm

I know the 3-lives rule (check page 8), but you would never know if Mouse had to come up with something in case of actual character death in the future.

So far it's been all fine and dandy, but maybe we'll see some BLOOD and GORE in the future.

And now we will see some true nature of Briar, maybe he's (*she, actually female, page 16) not just all talk like in Q&A.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 15th, 2019, 4:36 pm

@Dotpoint: Quick correction, Briar is a girl!

As to the rest of your comment, at the moment there are no plans to every include blood, gore, or graphic imagery in FYR, and my expectations for this to change are extremely low.

Reply Dotpoint, June 15th, 2019, 4:50 pm

@MouseWithADinosaurTail: Yeah, just checked it out and indeed she is a female.

And yes, FYR isn't seeking the brutal visual realism, but so far there has been strong emotions going on. Which are as important as visuals.

Realism hitting hard against Cedar's face might happen. And because there is that second and third chance for every team member, it is a real possibility during this run.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 15th, 2019, 5:37 pm

@Dotpoint: FYR has been trigger warned for major character death since the beginning. Since this is a nuzlocke comic, that TW practically comes pre-packaged with the genre. But I chose to outline it anyway since a lot of my audience comes from the PMD community, where character death isnt guaranteed. That doesn't mean FYR is guaranteed to have MCD- I couldve had a deathless run, after all- but its a real possibility.

Also, just a quick clarification about the rules of the run! The three revives rule indicates I can use three revives for the entire team, not for each team member. That means, for example, if Cedar died and was revived three times, then if Shelly died I couldnt revive her, since I already used all three. (That is a COMPLETELY HYPOTHETICAL EXAMPLE.)

Reply jaketheflareon231, June 15th, 2019, 6:32 pm

briar has a bad temper

Reply Hardychuckle (Guest), June 15th, 2019, 7:48 pm

Briar is so rude.

Reply Garnet107, June 15th, 2019, 8:53 pm

Ooh is this gonna lead to the rival battle? But also I guess this is why Briar was on the home page.

Reply Garnet107, June 15th, 2019, 8:53 pm

Well, seeing as that’s the only boss defeated on the home page, then yes, Briar did beat Rocksa

Reply Garnet107, June 15th, 2019, 9:00 pm

Well, not in comic. But in game she must have beaten Rocksa by now.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 15th, 2019, 9:01 pm

@Garnet107: Y'all this conversation is so confusing dskjfghkdfg

Reply Garnet107, June 15th, 2019, 9:05 pm

Well why dont u clarify it for us? I’m confused too. I just thought that since in psmd when u beat a boss, it shows on the card. So I thought since it said that Briar beat Rocksa, it meant she beat her. But like idk help meeeeee

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 15th, 2019, 9:08 pm

@Garnet107: Do you not remember chapter three? Cedar defeated Roksa. The adventure log is always for the same adventure, THIS adventure, even if a different character is taking over as the main character for a short while.

Reply Garnet107, June 15th, 2019, 9:10 pm

Ohhh I’m an idiot. I feel really dumb rn.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 15th, 2019, 9:14 pm

@Garnet107: You're fine, Garnet, no worries! Tbh I considered Cedar and Briar having completely separate adventure logs just to avoid the potential confusion, buuuut, work. >w< I am very bad at convincing myself to draw anything that isn't a FYR page.

Reply BudgieGryphon, June 15th, 2019, 10:03 pm

Mild blood, eh?
*looks at every story I’ve ever written after I was 11*
*laughs slowly*

Reply JoeytheShuppet, June 15th, 2019, 11:47 pm

Mild Blood?

Reply DarkFlameOSecrets, June 16th, 2019, 1:37 am

Done. They are dubbed true rivals now

Reply Julian or Yoshidakid, June 16th, 2019, 1:38 pm

Shes moody :/

Reply Julian or Yoshidakid, June 16th, 2019, 1:39 pm

Mild blood? Tis be okie

Reply Moon creechor (Guest), June 16th, 2019, 3:06 pm

I noted

Reply MrUmbreon1994, June 17th, 2019, 8:13 am

could this be character devlopment?? who knows, either way excited for the next chapter :) being a Nuzlocker (of sorts XD) I am fine with blood and character death, cant wait to read, who knows we may even get a new team member

Reply orgostevani, June 20th, 2019, 11:45 am

Wow, not even saying goodbye to your mother?

That's low.

Reply Murp (Guest), June 21st, 2019, 4:36 pm

As long as the blood is minimal, this should be fine.

Reply Shruikan, September 1st, 2019, 9:34 am

OK, that narration is now my new favourite way to segue into a sidestory.

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