Intermission 1, Page 2

June 18th, 2019, 2:00 pm

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Reply Moon creechor (Guest), June 18th, 2019, 2:11 pm

Well she is angy

Reply Allieluigico, June 18th, 2019, 2:11 pm

Dang. Not even her mom. She is... she is one rebel if I do say myself, just SENDS SHIVERS down my spine.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 18th, 2019, 4:05 pm

@Allieluigico: Briar puts fear in the HEARTS OF MEN!

Reply Moon creechor (Guest), June 18th, 2019, 2:12 pm

Yes

Reply comercole, June 18th, 2019, 2:16 pm

she is so angry!!!!!!!

Reply ShadowStalker1128, June 18th, 2019, 2:21 pm

Strange thing to point out but I like her freckles,,,,

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 18th, 2019, 4:05 pm

@ShadowStalker1128: Thank you very much!

Reply littaly, June 18th, 2019, 2:23 pm

Briar nooooo. I LOVE the addition of her freckles!!

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 18th, 2019, 4:05 pm

@littaly: Thank you! :D

Reply Hardychuckle (Guest), June 18th, 2019, 2:40 pm

Don't rage about problems kids. Always stay calm and influence the younger to stay calm in situations. Even if they are really bad.

Reply Garnet107, June 18th, 2019, 3:13 pm

I kinda feel bad for Briar. Even if she’s isn’t really thinking. Like, she should say goodbye to her parents (partially bc we’ve never seen them before). And, Cedar did say goodbye to Basil. And like probably some other mons as she was leaving.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 18th, 2019, 4:04 pm

@Garnet107: Cedar did say goodbye to Basil, yeah. I wonder why word of that hasnt spread... *coughs*

Reply Dotpoint, June 18th, 2019, 3:29 pm

Man, she is portrayed as quite a sociopath. Maybe even too much that it drowns all her other traits.

But then again, overdoing "the evil" to the extreme could be interesting.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 18th, 2019, 4:04 pm

@Dotpoint: In what world does not saying goodbye to one's mom = sociopathy? :thinking:

Reply Dotpoint, June 18th, 2019, 11:42 pm

@MouseWithADinosaurTail: Leaving own home and family for several months (with very limited means of communicating with them), without feeling the need to say farewells to anyone means one of following:

1. Briar is very child-minded and can't understand the finality of the situation, and stormed off during a tantrum and will hopefully regret the decision.

2. Briar has some serious anger issues (this anger came from rather trivial reason) and doesn't think straight during those.

3. Briar actually is a sociopath and does not feel empathy towards anyone. Which might not be correct as she had friends at Littleroot.

4. They are Pokemon and human emotions and morals don't apply to them like we would think.

5. Mouse didn't want to spoil Sceptile design for future reasons.

Man, I might have to tone down my comments in the future and keep some things to myself.

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 19th, 2019, 6:02 am

@Dotpoint: I think the fact that she knew she SHOULD say goodbye at all is indicative of the fact that she is not a sociopath.

Reply Pokemon151 (Guest), June 18th, 2019, 5:00 pm

Wow she is VERY angry and she's not gonna say goodbye to her mom... dang
And I love the briar's freckles

Reply Truefan108, June 18th, 2019, 5:29 pm

Briar is gonna be ticked when she sees Cedar evolved

Reply Julian or Yoshidakid, June 18th, 2019, 6:03 pm

This sounds like my sister yesterday... And every other day SHE KEEPS LEAVING WITHOUT TELLING ANYONE REEEE

Reply Moon creechor (Guest), June 18th, 2019, 7:03 pm

She hase anger problems

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 18th, 2019, 9:06 pm

@yellowflame16: Something I really appreciate about you, Yellow, is you always try very hard to be an attentive and analytical reader! Those sorts of readers are hard to come by, so thank you! :3

Reply BudgieGryphon, June 18th, 2019, 9:55 pm

Freckles make her look tougher, cool!

Reply Lavenry, June 19th, 2019, 6:51 am

Can I punch her in the face kthxbye

Reply JoeytheShuppet, June 19th, 2019, 8:18 am

Maybe.

Reply DarkFlameOSecrets, June 19th, 2019, 10:17 am

Oo. The rebel

Reply LuckyPuppie, June 19th, 2019, 1:20 pm

Not even her Mom... jeez Briar...

Reply Garnet107, June 19th, 2019, 3:39 pm

So I’m just gonna post this on every comic that inspired me
http://pkmn-aomtf.smackjeeves.com/comics/2813962/inspiration-not-related-to-comic/

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 19th, 2019, 4:13 pm

@Garnet107: Pika, Wheeler, and Scuffyeevee? You have excellent taste in comic artists! :DDD I love all of their work too!

And aah, I'm very flattered that you're inspired by me too! I'm glad this little comic can mean something in people's lives. Thank you Garnet, you're a very supportive and treasured reader ^w^

Reply Hawktalon,, June 19th, 2019, 6:13 pm

Aaa! I haven't stopped by in a while! I'm very excited to see what happens next, and the narration a la a main series pokemon movie is adorable and hilarious

Reply RandomEgg, June 20th, 2019, 7:57 pm

*GASP*

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