Intermission 1, Page 3

June 20th, 2019, 2:00 pm

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Reply AssaultBird2454, June 13th, 2019, 2:54 pm

Pfft this birb! Hope it’s the one from the forest! Cause that was be amazing haha

Reply DarkFlameOSecrets, June 20th, 2019, 2:04 pm

That was wuick

Reply comercole, June 20th, 2019, 2:09 pm

What is she doing!!!!

Reply Dotpoint, June 20th, 2019, 2:13 pm

The Magic Words?

I'll guess Briar will be conducting some gunboat diplomacy.

Reply Truefan108, June 20th, 2019, 2:13 pm

Baby no

Reply Pokemon151 (Guest), June 20th, 2019, 2:51 pm

Oooo I sense trouble

Reply Garnet107, June 20th, 2019, 2:51 pm

seeing as your rival only gets a swellow much later on, im assuming the tailow will join Briars team eventually, but not yet.

Reply 9rainbowtails, June 20th, 2019, 4:03 pm

Oh my arceus! She has FRECKLES

Reply Lotus Morales (Guest), June 20th, 2019, 5:35 pm

Oh no

Reply Firelord6127, June 20th, 2019, 9:27 pm

This is going to go well

Reply JoeytheShuppet, June 20th, 2019, 10:51 pm

Flying Type.

I'd consider your odds.

Reply LIN3R, June 21st, 2019, 7:49 am


Reply Murp (Guest), June 21st, 2019, 4:37 pm

I wouldn't try that...

Reply Julian or Yoshidakid, June 22nd, 2019, 1:20 am

Boooo i thought you be smarter than that REEEEE dats weak birb

Reply ZHODY the delfinator, June 25th, 2019, 4:56 pm

oh! just noticed their dirty freckles!!

Reply LuckyPuppie, June 26th, 2019, 12:41 pm

I really like the fact that Briar's journey is being shown as well, even if it's just for a bit. In quite a few of the nuzlocke comics I read, the rival is just that one character that shows up trying to be better than you every now and then. In short, they're just the rival, and that's that. But when you show the journey of them and what they've gone through it really helps develop the character and it makes them feel like a proper character and not just a rival. That's one of the reasons I really enjoy to read this comic, every character feels like their own pokemon with their own personality and goals, other than just a pokemon in a comic to fill the roles that are needed, and that's why I respect Briar and even some side characters like Basil a lot more than other characters I've seen.
Keep up the good work! (^w^)b

Reply MouseWithADinosaurTail, June 26th, 2019, 3:12 pm

@LuckyPuppie: Thank you very much, Lucky! One of my main goals in this comic is for even the most irrelevant side characters to feel like they are the protagonist of their own stories. I'm glad it seems like I'm succeeding! ^w^

I honestly considered cutting this chapter for a long time, cause I was worried people would hate it cause they missed Cedar. But the reception has been really good so far, and I'm glad for that. ^w^

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